09-11-2009, 06:18 PM
#11
Last edited by Josue; 09-11-2009 at 06:21 PM.
09-11-2009, 06:24 PM
#12
No, I don't even see a map. I downloaded it into my Starcraft folder, but it still will not allow me to play it. I did try changing the files directory name from an RAR file to a SCX file, but that didn't work either.
@Wait, saw your edit, that might work. Never mind, It didn't.
Last edited by Shadow Archon; 09-11-2009 at 06:27 PM.
09-11-2009, 06:25 PM
#13
09-11-2009, 06:27 PM
#14
09-11-2009, 06:30 PM
#15
Last edited by Josue; 09-11-2009 at 06:38 PM.
09-11-2009, 06:37 PM
#16
There we go, it should run now. I'll try the first level, and than we can talk about it.
09-11-2009, 07:15 PM
#17
Okay. There was some good Triggers and the map looked impressive, but........
1st off, The dialogue needs to be revamped. Some of it sounds redundant. Also, though its not a really important thing, you violated some lore. Tassadar fought Zeratul the first time they met. And Raynor was present during this as well. "The Queen of Blades" novel goes through this. You don't have to worry about it though. This also includes the fact that some units that were created during the Brood War were present here, even though they don't exist by this point in the Lore.
2nd, While I was playing, A group of Hydras froze in place for about 10 seconds. Has this happend before?
3rd, Though its great you added sounds, some of them are repeated right after they are said. Could you mix it up a bit?
Everything else though was pretty good. The triggers you used to make Raynor's Raiders appear and the Zerg sending wave after wave was perfect.
09-11-2009, 08:20 PM
#18
Sorry... never read the novels... I don't think there's any way to possibly get them here in my country... what do you mean about the Raynor bit? He does appear!!!
About the corsairs... I thought they were units created by the dark templars, that you could find in shakuras but not in Aiur... so Zeratul had some of them while exploring the space...
for your 2nd point... no... I don't remember such a thing... what do you mean by "froze"?
Well, I'm here to get feedback, therefore I'll be fixing the campaign sometime later... did you get to play the next mission?
Thanks a lot for your time and patience.
Last edited by Josue; 09-11-2009 at 08:34 PM.
09-11-2009, 08:57 PM
#19
Okay. Raynor is present when Zeratul meats Tassadar in the book. That point, you don't have to worry about it since you can't get the book.
I meant mostly Lurkers and Devourers.
The Hydras simply stopped moving after firing at the shuttle. They didn't respond for like 10 seconds even though I was attacking them. This is just a small bug, don't worry about it. If it happens to more people, you might need to look in on it.
Well, your better at making missions than I am. I just make some small time scenarios that are not even worth downloading. I did make one that was suppose to be a copy of the Blood Gultch map from Halo. Mainly because I love Red vs Blue.
I haven't played the second one yet. Im letting a guy play Starcraft who hasn't played it before or even heard about it before I met him.(Yet he has heard of the Pylon song) He seems to be pretty good at it. Not Korean good, but pretty good.
Last edited by Shadow Archon; 09-11-2009 at 08:59 PM.
09-11-2009, 09:28 PM
#20