
Originally Posted by
Agiel7
If they were going to end the story with Kerrigan regaining her lost humanity, here's how I would have done it:
The combined forces of the Dominion and Raynor's Raiders are on the brink of annihilation on Char. Confident that victory is hers, she decides to visit the battlefield just as the Zerg are mopping up. While on the ground, she sees the Zerg about to close in on the final pocket of resistance, where Raynor and company are hunkered down. Outgunned, outmanuevered, and exhausted, Raynor finally collapses just as the Gauss rifles of the other Marines click at the pull of a trigger. The last of the Terrans look onto the hordes of Zerg with despair, that is when Raynor spots a female ghost that was part of his detachment on her knees and on the verge of tears. He embraces her, attempting to comfort the ghost. That is when New Gettysburg flashback cinematic flash inside Kerrigan's head, then images of her crimes. She suffers a conscience attack as a result of her confronting the scale of her crimes, so massive that she screams in agony as she clutches her head.
Cut back to Raynor, Jimmy and company look up to see that the Zerg of Char are now docile with no Kerrigan to command them. Fearing that they would aggravate them again if they start shooting, the group carefully walks between them, completely bewildered by this sight. The small detachment eventually happens upon Kerrigan, who is now completely catatonic. Tychus doesn't betray Raynor because it's completely ludicrous that Mengsk banked on a single Marine on being in that situation to kill Kerrigan (and lets face it, Tychus is an awesome character), and Raynor cradles the still catatonic Kerrigan in his arms and walks back to the Hyperion and into an uncertain future.
Granted, my idea is no different from fan-fiction.