Who is good with creative writting and knows extensive protoss/terran lore?
11-19-2009, 04:45 PM
#1
Who is good with creative writting and knows extensive protoss/terran lore?
11-19-2009, 05:01 PM
#2
Would like to contribute, tough ask the rest of the forum and lets see what we get out of it.
Edit: By the way, what's the story about?
Last edited by The_Blade; 11-19-2009 at 05:19 PM.
11-19-2009, 06:06 PM
#3
If anyone else wants to give constructive feedback Id be happy to send them the story.
11-19-2009, 06:12 PM
#4
Send it to me so I can bash it to pieces.
11-20-2009, 10:40 AM
#5
Depends on how much you want edited. I'm a decent writer -- science writing minor -- and I'd like to help contribute. And I've got the Protoss down pat.
... Only thing is, I just remembered I may not have internet access for a while after today. Damn...
EDIT A prof confirmed the lab should be open for use over Thanksgiving break. Hrm... possibilities...
Last edited by Visions of Khas; 11-20-2009 at 10:54 AM.
Aaand sold.
Be it through hallowed grounds or lands of sorrow
The Forger's wake is bereft and fallow
Is the residuum worth the cost of destruction and maiming;
Or is the shaping a culling and exercise in taming?
The road's goal is the Origin of Being
But be wary through what thickets it winds.
11-20-2009, 10:54 AM
#6
Edit was a poor choice of words. Its more of an outline of a story right now.
11-20-2009, 10:55 AM
#7
Oh, so expand and expound upon? Ghost write? Collaborate?
Aaand sold.
Be it through hallowed grounds or lands of sorrow
The Forger's wake is bereft and fallow
Is the residuum worth the cost of destruction and maiming;
Or is the shaping a culling and exercise in taming?
The road's goal is the Origin of Being
But be wary through what thickets it winds.
11-20-2009, 02:12 PM
#8
If you want, you can send me a copy and I'll give it a look. I've been working on my own story (no I haven't forgotten it, *cough*Modern Warfare 2 Assassin's Creed 2 Dragon Age: Origins*cough* got in my way. I'm working on it, promise!), so I may be able to help a little if you wish
Edit: Ok, I got it. I need to head to work now, but I'll go over it tonight and let you know what I think.
Last edited by Draco97; 11-20-2009 at 02:39 PM.
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