11-03-2015, 03:16 PM
#1
Last edited by Visions of Khas; 11-03-2015 at 04:01 PM.
Aaand sold.
Be it through hallowed grounds or lands of sorrow
The Forger's wake is bereft and fallow
Is the residuum worth the cost of destruction and maiming;
Or is the shaping a culling and exercise in taming?
The road's goal is the Origin of Being
But be wary through what thickets it winds.
11-03-2015, 05:52 PM
#2
11-03-2015, 06:06 PM
#3
11-03-2015, 06:06 PM
#4
No, Undead. They're all stand-alone stories.![]()
Aaand sold.
Be it through hallowed grounds or lands of sorrow
The Forger's wake is bereft and fallow
Is the residuum worth the cost of destruction and maiming;
Or is the shaping a culling and exercise in taming?
The road's goal is the Origin of Being
But be wary through what thickets it winds.
11-03-2015, 06:15 PM
#5
HAHA YEAUGH. Thanks Khas![]()
11-03-2015, 07:22 PM
#6
11-03-2015, 07:47 PM
#7
'A fully crewed arkship could fight a war without support. It could evacuate an entire colony—an
entire system filled with colonies and outposts—thanks to its vast halls of stasis pods. It could lose
power and drift for centuries and keep all of its crew alive the whole while.'
tfw telling unnecessary info in fiction is bad form
tfw this info might be important
tfw 'into the void'
Arcturus Mengsk did nothing wrong. Tarsonis is just a conspiracy theory.
11-03-2015, 07:49 PM
#8
I liked it, but to be honest, I don't like that theres so much emphasis on the Protoss feeling emotion through the Khala. It makes them seem too emotional when they should be fairly stolid. In SC1 you still felt like Tassadar and Fenix were capable and private individuals. Not that they aren't here.
What I did like a lot though is how they made the Conclave a little less ridiculous than they usually seem to be, here they are fairly reasonable, even if they do require some convincing.
11-03-2015, 08:06 PM
#9
11-03-2015, 08:11 PM
#10
They were described as having pangs of horror/doubt as they approached the star and before they unilaterally accepted what would happen. I mean emotional in terms of the degree of feeling emotion, I just feel as if the Protoss should have those emotions, but feel them more stoically, reserved for major and unique events (such as this one) but feel them as an individual does, all the while being generally mores stolid. Its more the fact that the Protoss are feeling all the time, whereas someone like Fenix never really becomes saddened or devastated (of course Fenix was special, but still).