
Originally Posted by
FanaticTemplar
I'd fuse Brood War and Heart of the Swarm, focusing on Kerrigan and applying the objectives of the latter and the end result of the former, and ditch Wings of Liberty. Taken in itself, I like Wings better than the other two, but it doesn't really lead from or to anything.
The devastation of the invasion of Aiur has left both the Protoss and Zerg severely crippled, Mengsk takes advantage of the opportunity to press his newly unified Terran might against them. The small nomadic Dark Templar tribes make ideal targets, and Dark templar keep getting killed or captured for experimentation. On Aiur, the Protoss are forced to evacuate because the mindless Zerg are completely unpredictable and the Khalai population can't be protected. They escape to Shakuras, the world where the Dark Templar meet to discuss issues relevant to the tribes. There is significant resistance to the Aiur Protoss 'invasion' of their world (maybe introduce Ulrezaj as an antagonist) and to buy some good will, the Templar set out to help liberate and protect the Dark Templar from the Dominion.
Also fighting the Dominion, they find Kerrigan who is pretty dead-set on revenge. Mengsk is basically making enemies everywhere, and Kerrigan is using the Zerg to spearhead the assault. It's all a big happy alliance of Mengsk-haters, and the Dark Templar help Kerrigan gain control over more Zerg by killing Cerebrates, but eventually the Aldaris thing happens because Kerrigan no longer trusts anybody and had neuraled Raszagal to ensure the Protoss' cooperation. The Protoss are outraged and turn on her. This begins a sequence where Kerrigan's descent into inhumanity causes her to be abandoned by her allies one by one until, during the final assault on Augustgrad Kerrigan's complete berserking makes even Raynor realise that she's now closer to Mengsk than to human Kerrigan, sacrificing anything and anyone to achiever her goals.
She kills Mengsk, but that hatred was the only remaining human emotion in her, the only driving force that kept her alive. Without her love for Raynor or her hatred for Mengsk, the only thing humanity has for her is pain, and rather than endure it she submerges herself into the Hivemind, giving up the torments of a self and taking refuge in the embrace of countless others who are like her. More than friends, more than family. One heart, one mind, immortal in a multitude of bodies. She retreats with the Swarm to Char to complete her metamorphosis, and when she returns, there shall be nothing human left of her.