09-18-2009, 09:15 AM
#1
09-18-2009, 10:13 AM
#2
Impressive summary indeed.
09-18-2009, 12:33 PM
#3
I assume the "Written by Gradius" is because Gradius posted the article on the front page?
09-18-2009, 12:34 PM
#4
09-18-2009, 12:44 PM
#5
Extremely well thought-out arguments and well presented evidence. Some of the grammar issues are distracting though. Another read-through is in order to weed out some of those errors.
Apart from my writing OCD, well done. The final conclusions about Kerrigan's personality and character seem plausible, if not fairly accurate. Intelligent summaries that are not overly long or tangential.
All in all, a fine piece with good insights. Bravo.
You represent what is greatest in us all, and all our hopes go with you. EN TARO ADUN, brave Sons of Aiur!
09-18-2009, 01:13 PM
#6
09-18-2009, 01:48 PM
#7
I got rid of all the ones you mentioned... :P
I noticed one badly worded paragraph and then a half sentence that I must have left in by accident. But other than that I don't see too many outright errors.
Anyway, thank you all for the very kinda words. Much appreciated.
Last edited by Aldrius; 09-18-2009 at 01:50 PM.
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Thanks to Dynamik- for the signature!
09-18-2009, 02:09 PM
#8
A very good read, that brings up the reason I like Kerrigan as well.
I had actually been playing with the idea of writing something like that myself, just with Nova instead - since it was an excerpt from "StarCraft Ghost: Nova" that got me to start buying StarCraft novels.
09-18-2009, 02:21 PM
#9
Also, be sure to digg this article if you guys enjoyed it: http://sclegacy.com/
They can be left in there for stylistic reasons - such as the first sentence.![]()
09-18-2009, 10:19 PM
#10
This is a nice summary. Sounds a lot like me. Just kidding. Kerrigan has been a very fascinating character to me. I look forward to seeing what amazing twist and turns occurs in sc2.