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    Default Feedback on my Commentary please! :P

    Hi guys my name is Jonus and I am the leader of clan 1nsanity. Anyways I am starting to do some Commentary on replays of my clan's tournaments, clan wars, and league games and I’m interested in what the starcraft community thinks of my Commentary. Good or bad feedback is welcomed, or hell maybe you just think I’m so horrible I should just stop doing it completely lol. Anyways look forward to your comments (I think lol) and hope you do enjoy the games.

    www.youtube.com/jonushk

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    Default Re: Feedback on my Commentary please! :P

    Hello, Jonus, let me introduce you here.

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    Default Re: Feedback on my Commentary please! :P

    Moved.

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    Thanks :P

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    By no means a bad cast.

    .. i can imagine this being quite sweet to watch for any and all wtih any relation to the players &/or clans involved.. personally i felt a bit detached from it.

    things that might drag me into it; what are the stakes for the players right now and who are they? (im sure you mentioned who was from your clan at start but i instantly forgot) ... how the clan-war actually went and details of other matches from it.. thats kind of irrelevant or atleast spoiler material; if you want t build any tension save that 'till after the game (or after the last game if youre casting several games from the cw/series/whatever)

    also, analysis of where the game is at given the starting buildorders; i think its safe to assume you can come up with something more to say than that you prefer tank centric play to bio-centric;

    its LT. its cross-map. one player is fast expanding and the other is not. there's much to spinn off on there.

    GL casting and thanks for thinking of SCL for possible feedback (its a pity if youre only here to promote your casting and clan though)
    I am an enthusiast of good strategy games, sc2Esports and rollplay, although i dont really play anything atm.
    I work an internship at a government agency this fall, and have a good time at it.
    I'm being more social, active and honest lately. in all forums.

    Hi.

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    Default Re: Feedback on my Commentary please! :P

    Quote Originally Posted by Todie View Post
    By no means a bad cast.

    .. i can imagine this being quite sweet to watch for any and all wtih any relation to the players &/or clans involved.. personally i felt a bit detached from it.

    things that might drag me into it; what are the stakes for the players right now and who are they? (im sure you mentioned who was from your clan at start but i instantly forgot) ... how the clan-war actually went and details of other matches from it.. thats kind of irrelevant or atleast spoiler material; if you want t build any tension save that 'till after the game (or after the last game if youre casting several games from the cw/series/whatever)

    also, analysis of where the game is at given the starting buildorders; i think its safe to assume you can come up with something more to say than that you prefer tank centric play to bio-centric;

    its LT. its cross-map. one player is fast expanding and the other is not. there's much to spinn off on there.

    GL casting and thanks for thinking of SCL for possible feedback (its a pity if youre only here to promote your casting and clan though)
    Thank you for all that feedback! that is very helpful! I am truly looking for feedback on how I can improve and that was some very good info. The more info I can get the better! I check out SCL all the time one of my top fourms I like to visit along side Team liquid! Anyways thanks again And I did just post a new video between Sixto and Ver. Check it out if you have time and let me know what you think. Next video I will take your suggestions and put them to work!

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    Default Re: Feedback on my Commentary please! :P

    Just so everyone knows I posted a couple more videos

    Sixto vs LiquidTyler
    Seansye Vs VTSpades

    Also The sixto vs tyler game I have a new mic with that game please tell me how the voice audio sounds! I feel its not the best quality but other people are saying its good! let me know what you think!

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    Default Re: Feedback on my Commentary please! :P

    Hello everyone!

    I just posted a Bo3! the players are Sixto vs EGinctrol! Some really good games, check them out!

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